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©2004-2009 ~AtroxilentiumX
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This is A picture taken while at Elkeh's house, she wanted some pictures os we wasted time and took pictures on her Digital camera.Edited in Photoshop and cropped a bit.Kind of a set of series, theres like more taken that day with her on the vines.I may load them if I get them from her.Tell me what you think.

PS:Thanks Elkeh

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i like the focus of the picture. :D

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:iconatroxilentiumx:
Wow is that not perverted, I have no comment.

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:P

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:iconhedwards:
I like it, kind of weird though with the soft focus on somebody wearing so much black.
If you intended it to be sharp, you might want to work on shapening or focusing the
camera. Otherwise it seems to really work.
The "cool" color balance suits the subject quite a bit.

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focus is an optional issue. it doesn't bother me that much. I'd crop out her right hand (it's floating on the frame) and get closer to her face. color is a bit cyan but it's understood in overcast days. lighting is fine.
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this is reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaallllllly pretty.is she your girlfriend?
:iconatroxilentiumx:
Thank you for your awsome critique.I will try what you have said and upload another IMage.Thank you for putting me on the right track.

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'Unmistakeable noise I was hearing,
unmistakeable noise I know so well...'
-A Perfect Circle\\Thinking Of You.
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Thank you and expect a sharper, better image.PLease comment on that one as well, you critique really helped.

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'Unmistakeable noise I was hearing,
unmistakeable noise I know so well...'
-A Perfect Circle\\Thinking Of You.
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You are welcome, the point of my comments is
always to help out. Nice to know that i am. =)

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I don't always get the grey area, that is why I shoot in color

-Peace

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